I really enjoyed the dish you cooked up. You are really good at adding colorful, random details that enhance the flavor and quality of your scenes. Makes me think you would be good at improv comedy!
The ending was my favorite part. The ceremonial…
Hilarious story! I loved the creative use of the 1/2 smidgen of satisfaction with the last line - it ties up the story perfectly.
The olive obsession provides a unique character build and interesting plot line. Who would have thought these random …